hmmm
lets see. hmm. you are the guy who comes onto my site and says my flash is shite. hah the irony. this would've barely survived judgement Jon. okay now sum good advice. try to make something with a plot or story line. Don't submit any unfinished work like this as that is pointless. try sprite animating or have a go at something else. please don't try to make stick deaths or anything similar. so in short, in my humble opinion, i think you should scrap this idea.